Episode 5: An Eye for an Eye
Scenes from the DVD set's "Final Shooting Script"
that do not appear in the episode.
BACK to transcript.
O'HARA - [has to restrain himself from striking her] Don't talk to me about our people. How many of our people have you murdered?
MacLEOD - Not to you.
CHARLIE - [looks around - MacLeod's the only one there] Right. [beat, hesitates]
EXT. FORESTED AREA – DAY
[In a clearing by an expanse of water, MacLeod and Richie train with swords.
MONTAGE – VARIOUS SCENES
A) as MacLeod guides Richie through the basic moves:
B) MacLeod shows Richie various sword-fighting stances: en garde, attack, defense, etc. Richie mirrors his moves.
C) MacLeod demonstrates various moves. Then . . .
THE FINAL ONE
Richie thrusts -- MacLeod parries the blow, knocks Richie's sword down, then whirls, bringing his sword around in a lightning-fast slice that stops well short of Richie.
Richie copies the move, whirls around -- and falls on his ass.
MacLeod smiles. Richie grits his teeth and gets up, determined to do it right.
D) MONTAGE – SEVERAL SCENES
as Richie and MacLeod perform this same move, over and over. Finally Richie does it perfectly, throws MacLeod a challenging look. Macleod nods his approval.]
MacLeod lunges at Richie, but this time Richie sees it coming. He strikes MacLeod's sword down, then whirls around in the move MacLeod has taught him, bringing his sword back at MacLeod with deadly speed -- it's all he can do to stop it bare inches before MacLeod's body.
Richie looks at MacLeod, breathing hard, freaked at just how close he came. MacLeod backs off, lowers his sword.
Richie warily watches for another surprise attack. MacLeod looks at him sternly, then . . .]
[Richie rests his hands on his thighs, still winded, worn out.]
RICHIE - Why are we practicing the same move over and over again?
MacLEOD - Because it's her favorite attack. It's your best shot at stopping her, and it's all I have time to teach you.
RICHIE - What happens if she tries something else? [MacLeod's face registers the doubt and fear he feels for Richie.] 'Nuff said.
[They pull down their masks. Charlie attacks. Richie falls back, defending -- then Charlie makes his "killing" thrust. Richie uses MacLeod's technique: knocks Charlie's Kendo sword down -- then whirls around, connects hard, and knocks Charlie back on his ass.
Charlie sits up on the mat, lifts his mask and stares at Richie in surprise.]
CHARLIE - Where the hell did you learn that?
RICHIE - [shrugs] My 'hood.
[Charlie stares at him suspiciously.]
The final scene in the loft was not in the original shooting script.
BACK to transcript.
BACK to Transcripts Page
| Home |
| Personal | Tess | TV Shows | Lord of the Rings | Pern |
| Actors | Buffy | Highlander | Transcripts | Fanfiction Links |
|Check out my Sitemap for more 'updates' info.||Last updated: July 27, 2012|