SEASON FIVE
Episode 16: Forgive Us Our Trespasses
Scenes from the DVD set's "Final Shooting Script"
that do not appear in the episode.
SCENE ONE
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SCENE TWO
KEANE - And I thought you were only interested in my body. [beat] Was it something I said?
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SCENE THREE
KEANE - Not twice in one night, sweetheart. [He leans on her, keeps her pinned. He twists the sword out of her hand and his blade goes to her neck.]
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SCENE FOUR
KEANE - I know who you are. I've hunted you for more than 200 years. [off MacLeod's look] I'm Steven Keane...
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SCENE FIVE
These 4 flashbacks (and accompanying voice-overs) were not included in the original shooting script.
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SCENE SIX
In the original shooting script, there are no voice-overs accompanying this scene.
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SCENE SEVEN
GRANDMOTHER - You want to help me? [re his sword] Bury the English bastards who did this. Make the dogs pay! Give me my revenge! [MacLeod reacts, his face hardens.]
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SCENE EIGHT
ROSEMONT - You have great patience with children, Steven. You should have some of your own. KEANE - It's easier for some than others. [ON MICHAEL as he follows a twining ivy runner off the path, between the trees. The sudden sound of hoofbeats and Michael looks up to see DUNCAN MACLEOD looming above him on horseback. Haggard and bearded, his outfit stained with mud and blood, MacLeod has been on the warpath since Culloden. He has the obvious look of a desperate man. He swings off the horse as we CUT TO:] [KEANE as he gets the BUZZ and ROSEMONT as he hears his son's SCREAM O.S.] [Whipping his dress sword out of its scabbard, Rosemont plunges into the woods. Keane, his sword also drawn, moves with him. They come face to face with MACLEOD holding the terrified boy by the arm.] KEANE - [re the boy] Let him go. [to Rosemont] He's here for me...
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SCENE NINE
MACLEOD'S NIGHTMARE [NOTE: The following clips should be PROCESSED for nightmare effect -- distorted sound, stretched images. Scenes from MacLeod's early life in Scotland are mixed with scenes from his post-Culloden rage, images and sounds overlapping.]
EXT. ERISKAY ISLAND - 1745 - DAY (SCENE 41805 FROM "THROUGH A GLASS DARKLY") [We are in the midst of a skirmish between a small knot of Scottish soldiers and their English counterparts.]
INT. CROFTER’S HUT - DAY (SCENE 10606 FROM "FAMILY TREE") [MacLeod's father comforts his dying son.] IAN - You fought well. You fought like a MacLeod.
EXT. WOODED FIELDS - SCOTLAND, 1746 - DAY (SCENE 41809 FROM "THROUGH A GLASS DARKLY") MacLeod comes upon a battle scene. A number of Scots lie dead.
EXT. MACLEOD’S VILLAGE - 1618 - DAY (SCENE 40111 FROM "HOMELAND") IAN - You are a Chieftain's son! You'll not walk away from this.
EXT. CEIRDWYN’S TAVERN - SCOTLAND, 1746 - DAY (SCENE 31730 FROM "TAKE BACK THE NIGHT") MACLEOD - They slaughtered four thousand Scots. Men, women, children in their mother's arms. I don't ask you to understand. CEIRDWYN - But I do. Only too well. [sadly] More blood does not make it better.
EXT. WOODS - SCOTLAND, 1746 - DAY (SCENE 31731 FROM "TAKE BACK THE NIGHT") [MacLeod comes across the bodies of the murdered Scot and his wife, hanging from a tree. He rides down the English Soldiers brutally, then sinks to his knees by the Scottish bodies, haunted and exhausted.]
EXT. BURNT CROFTER’S HUT - SCOTLAND - 1746 - DAY [The old Grandmother grabs his arm.] GRANDMOTHER - Bury the English bastards who did this.
QUICK CUTS [Of MacLeod striking down men -- soldiers like Willie and Rupert, men in civilian clothes, an unrelieved catalog of killing. Finally--]
EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRY ESTATE - GROUNDS - DAY [MacLeod grabs young Michael Dunbar.]
EXT. CASSANDRA'S HUT - 1606 - DAY (SCENE 50115 FROM "PROPHECY") [Young Duncan runs to his father.] YOUNG DUNCAN - Father! I'm here! [Ian grabs him and hugs him.]
EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRY ESTATE - GROUNDS - DAY [MacLeod's sword swings at Rosemont. And over it a young boy's scream--] MICHAEL - Father! [OVERLAPPING WITH:]
INT. MACLEOD FAMILY HOME - 1624 - NIGHT (SCENE 40131 FROM "HOMELAND") [MacLeod calls out as he enters the hut:] MACLEOD - Father? [Inside, Mary MacLeod sits by her husband's body.] MACLEOD - (CONT'D) Father...
EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRY ESTATE - GROUNDS - DAY [Rosemont's son reacts in horror--] MICHAEL - Father!
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SCENE TEN
MACLEOD - It never should have happened. [beat] I'd seen my people slaughtered. The whole world I'd known -- destroyed. [beat, with anger] I thought the answer was to kill as many English as possible. [a hard won lesson:] It was no answer.
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SCENE ELEVEN
[He doesn't answer, his eyes far away.]
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SCENE TWELVE
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SCENE THIRTEEN
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SCENE FOURTEEN
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SCENE FIFTEEN
METHOS - I want you to give yourself a break. I want you to admit you're human. [before MacLeod can answer] Not to me. To yourself.
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SCENE SIXTEEN
[There's no way MacLeod can hear this from Methos.] MACLEOD - Are we still talking about me?
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SCENE SEVENTEEN
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SCENE EIGHTEEN
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SCENE NINETEEN
With the exception of Keane's first line here (moved to SCENE SEVENTEEN), none of these scenes/lines are in the original shooting script.
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SCENE TWENTY
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SCENE TWENTY-ONE
[MacLeod says nothing, the pain evident on his face he has no answer.] KEANE - What? Nothing to say? You going to tell me he deserved it? That he'd done something dark and depraved to you or yours. |
SCENE TWENTY-TWO
SEAN BURNS' CHATEAU - DAY [The Dark MacLeod has come to Sean for help.] MACLEOD - What about the Quickenings? If one of us had... too many? SEAN - Could the evil overwhelm the good? I've spent years thinking about it. The truth is, I don't know. MACLEOD - I do. SEAN - I see. [beat] Come, we'll talk inside. MACLEOD - And when it happens? Which one is real? The Immortal you were.... or the one you've become? [He's going over. Face hardening. He draws his sword.] SEAN - I could fight you, Duncan, but you're better. I know it and so do you. [beat] But you're here because you want me to help you. I can't do that without my head. MACLEOD - That's too bad. [MacLeod raises the blade--] |
SCENE TWENTY-THREE
INSPECTOR BEGUE - I like to be thorough. [off MacLeod's look] |
SCENE TWENTY-FOUR
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SCENE TWENTY-FIVE
[MacLeod slams the table.] AMANDA - Look, I know you're upset now, but you'll thank me later. |
SCENE TWENTY-SIX
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SCENE TWENTY-SEVEN
[As Methos awkwardly moves to comfort her--] |
SCENE TWENTY-EIGHT
INT. DARIUS' CHURCH - DAY [MacLeod sits pensively, his thoughts with Darius.] MACLEOD - I don't know what happens to us when we die, Darius. I don't know if maybe you're still here somewhere, listening to me. [beat] I hope you are. [There's no response from the quiet church, but MacLeod finds the strength to continue:] MACLEOD - I can't tell you the number of times I've wished you were here so I could talk to you. There are so many things I didn't ask you. What happened to you, Darius? Did you wake up one morning and decide you were sick of the death and the blood and the sounds of men dying? [There's a long silence as MacLeod gathers his thoughts into words, then:] MACLEOD - He's a good man. I don't want to kill him. [beat] All he's done is judge me. Like I've judged others. [emotional] I'm so tired of killing. I'm so tired of deciding who to kill. [He looks up at the altar, at the cross.] |
SCENE TWENTY-NINE
[She nods, tears welling, says nothing. Keane sees it, has a moment of sympathy.] KEANE - [to MacLeod] On the roof. Five minutes. [He nods to Amanda, turns and heads out. MacLeod turns to Amanda.] MACLEOD - [without anger] This has to happen. [She's done arguing. Knows she can't convince him. Instead, she moves into his arms, holds on tight.] AMANDA - I know. [She steps back, meets his eyes. Forcing her voice steady:] Okay, MacLeod, you listen to me. |
SCENE THIRTY
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SCENE THIRTY-ONE
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SCENE THIRTY-TWO
AMANDA - But you let Keane live, too. So then who's right? MACLEOD - I never said it was simple. METHOS - Redemption never is. [MacLeod nods in Methos' direction.] |
SCENE THIRTY-THREE
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